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Buried Alive In Nightmares by *Eefera:iconEefera:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open




I’ve been buried alive in endless nightmares
That move my tongue in broken words behind
The mask of my fra c t    ure d lips.
There are shadows playing somber ballads in the
Glass of my bedroom windowpane.

Radiation lights are blinding my faded eyes
And the smell of rotting resolution fills my senses.
You’re playing with fire when you touch my skin
With heated fingertips… taking advantage of my
Faltering resolve that shakes and bends beneath
Your star shot smile.

All these imaginary crimes you are committing
With sun-kissed lips against my shoulder,
Leaving third degree burns in your wake;
I’m falling backwards into black nothingness
My vision blurs and the edges of reality disappear.

But ask me now… is it a nightmare?
Or is it sweet dreams masked in the cover of doubt.


©2009 *Eefera
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~HiddenDragon-IPV Jul 3, 2009, 2:32:11 PM
I don't know what this means but it sounds awesome and it makes you think, which is good, right? :+fav:

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~KestrelAspen Jul 3, 2009, 2:46:55 PM
i'm kind of in love with this
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*losingmyfaith Jul 3, 2009, 2:52:53 PM
I like this...a lot. I'm rather in love with the third stanza. I think it's awesome (: great work!

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
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*Eefera Jul 3, 2009, 5:14:58 PM
Thank you hun! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like the third stanza a lot too.
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*Eefera Jul 3, 2009, 5:15:10 PM
Yup, that's usually a good thing :lol:

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*Eefera Jul 3, 2009, 5:15:45 PM
Thank you darlin! I really appreciate all of your comments and support!
:hug:
:heart:

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

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~KestrelAspen Jul 3, 2009, 5:37:20 PM
awww...you're so sweet :heart:
:hug:
and you're welcome, of course

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~ShadowRaven1 Jul 3, 2009, 6:10:04 PM
Don't scrap it my dear. It's good, very deep =)
I like it.

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*losingmyfaith Jul 3, 2009, 7:00:37 PM
you're most welcome :heart:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
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