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chemicals at war between us by *Eefera:iconEefera:



I smiled innocently at the world while you painted icescapes inside my blood. Chemicals war between your fingertips and my skin; you’re breaking through the surface. Wine spills between our lips and paints red on the sides of our necks.

I’ve stolen our souls and melted them into the cracks of our consciences. Restless fingers reside upon triggers of loaded guns pointed straight through my heart. I’m letting black blood trickle through the filters and land on the pavement beside our dreams.

Silver nitrate spreads through my veins and my eyes shift to platinum spheres, colorblind and lost in a world of shadows. I’m desperately searching for your hands to warm my thoughts but you have become a ghost in a world of make believe.

Cello voices reverberate through my vertebrae and twist around my spinal cord with the precision of drum beats. I’m tripping and gasping and grasping for breath that eludes my shattered fingers. Are we truly beyond the arms of redemption?
©2009 *Eefera
:iconeefera:

Author's Comments

< b>{As the hole becomes apart I strike to burn
And no flame returns
Every intuition fails to find it's way
One more table turned around I'm back again
Finding I'm a lost and found when she's not around
When she's not around I feel it coming down}
-Finger Eleven Slow Chemical

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:iconcorina90:
i loooooved this.
:iconcharismareina:
Its lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed.
:icon7ucille:
"you have become a ghost in a world of make believe."

I love this line. Well written.
:iconlighght:
very well written. fantastic flow of words.

nice work.
:iconlosingmyfaith:
good piece, i liked it (:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconrainbow-masquerade:
Well done this piece flows beautifully and overall is really really good! I love it!

--
I will not play at tug o war. I'd rather play at hug o war.
Where everyone hugs instead of tugs.
Where everyone giggles, and rolls on the rug.
Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins
and everyone cuddles and everyone wins

=Mental-IllnessClub
:iconiheldyoucloser:
well, this was gorgeous.
:heart:

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park that car,
drop that phone,
sleep on the floor,
dream about me.
:iconjadengurldreamer:
Your lovely words paint a vivid picture as always!
:iconlaughatyourself:
So beautiful, I love it :heart:

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